mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3

[ENIHCAMBUS]

Put batteries in the flashlight, hope it isn't dead now.

[Sublevel 114]

Whistle, so that the echo tells you how huge is the room.

Mr. Stick thinks there is better way to examine the room...

put batteries in the torch duh

tuck those batteries in the flashlight... duh.

Put batteries in the flashlight, hope it isn't dead now.

...Yeah, like flashlight.
He puts both batteries back in flashlight...

Turn it on after and explore the surroundings.

...and turns it on.



That's better. Flashlight is almost dead, but now Mr. Stick can see through darkness. He don't know how much time flashlight would keep working... But he hopes for better.

He can see familiar hatch above. He also again notices the same holes on walls above. And it seems it wasn't coincidence when he crossed those holes with his body the hatch has been immediately closed...

He made step, and something rustled under his feet. And the sound is different from sound of soil ground...



Oh, it appeared it is just OFFENSIVE NOTE he dropped down earlier...
Wait! What are these big holes to the left and to the right from him?





They look like passages...
Mr. Stick wonders where do they lead?

[ENIHCAMBUS]

Check right one first.

[Vortex]

Take a peek before entering.

[Sublevel 114]

< Sorry for delaying. Let's continue! >

Check right one first.

Take a peek before entering.

Mr. Stick takes a peek before entering the right passage - it seems there is another room there...
He didn't noticed anything strange, so he moves into passage, and soon he can see the room.



There's still soil ground under his feet everywhere. And far side of room is more far than in all previous rooms.

AUTHOR'S QUESTION

I am thinking about adding secrets to the story... that give some bonus content.

What do you think?

[ENIHCAMBUS]

What is that thing?

@Author's question: Yeah! Why not?

[bender]

@ Author's question: Yes add secret watermelons!

Only thing Submachine doesn't have!

[Sublevel 114]

What is that thing?

< What is "that thing"?
:P

Please, tell mr. Stick specific command >

[Vortex]

Command: look at that black thing illuminated by the flashlight.

AUTHOR'S QUESTION

I am thinking about adding secrets to the story... that give some bonus content.

What do you think?

I was also thinking the same when doing my story... that I could add some secret content to satisfy more skilled players. But the main problem is, what do you do if people completely miss the secrets? anyways I added a secret in the "BEAST" title screen as an experiment to see if people would notice, but noone did so far (well you did but because I told you XD), and that helped me finally decide against.

in my story I don't think they would work because the characters won't normally revisit old locations, and soon they will start to have somewhat complex layout. But in your story I think they could work, and as added benefit if we know there may be secrets beforehand we will pay more attention to everything.

[Sublevel 114]

Command: look at that black thing illuminated by the flashlight.

Mr. Stick fully enters the room. He starts to examine it. He goes inspect near side of room first (near to the fourth wall).



Strange device stands in the way of flashlight's beam. It stands on three legs, dug in the ground. Device has hole on one side, it seems something should be inserted here... maybe...
No, Mr. Stick can't say right now what is this device for.

wait... He can see something behind it... What...



Is it abyss???