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Re: Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.
It looked interesting.
Are you going to continue it?
Are you going to continue it?
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.
Likely in July.Boingo wrote:It looked interesting.
Are you going to continue it?
Sorry.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.
1 year later Surigon arrived on planet Earth, more specifically in the Alps. A french guy called "Andy Le Gurt" found him one day and taked care of him. One year later Surigon knew more about humans and decided to left andy. A few days later he noticed that the same Chaos copy has reached the planet Earth; Surigon remembers him, and he will take revenge of the destruction of his planet. Chaos moves to the East, but Surigon cannot reach him now.
A few days later, Surigon finds a town, a town in riots, because the animals of the zoo escaped. He goes to the zoo to talk with its owner. The owner gets scared when he see Surigon, because its an alien; from many years, humans are enemies of an alien species called the "Alien-Aliens" (Appearance: Steriotypical aliens); The owner obviously thinked that Surigon was a kind of pet of the AA, but Surigon explained he has no relation with those creatures. The owner said to Surigon to help retrieve the animals back to the zoo and save the city. Surigon's fathers give to him for defense a pair of Antimatter powered gloves, to give powerfull punchs. With that Surigon silenced most of the animals, withouth killing them, and send them back to the zoo. The most impactant battle was the one with the gorila, when Surigon seen a primitive version of his species, he got shocked. However Surigon thinks that humans are something rare, they seem to not envolved at the most smart point of the brain, however they even have very good tech too.
With all the animals in the zoo, the town is saved, and Surigon left it and goes to the forest.
A few days in the forest, Surigon is finded by a guy with a car near the road, he takes him to Paris, his home.
The guy taked Surigon as pet, Surigon didn't liked that as he is to advanced to be called "pet". When they reach Paris, Surigon get surprised when he see the buildings, whose foundations is on the ground instead on trees like in Daif. When he reached guy's home, Surigon escaped on the night. Surigon seen the Eifel tower, he finds it interesting, is big, old, attracts to much people, and looks to diferent to any other building. As fuzzles climb to much trees, Surigon wanted to climb the tower. That caused a big mess with the public when they seen an alien creature in the top of the tower, a few helicopters tried to down Surigon from here. The same guy appeared again, and climbed the tower and said to Surigon:
Guy: Suri, my pet, please go down.
Surigon: I'm not your pet! >:(
This conversation distracted Surigon and someone shoted a tranquilizer dart.
Surigon awakes in the house of that guy and escapes again.
He went to the West of the city to the airport, but he doesn't have money, later Surigon finds a hope. There is a biplane racing with models of XX centaury (WTF!, Said Surigon). The price is a rebuilded biplane and some money. When Surigon won that race, the guy at 2nd place wanted a rematch for the next day (happens that the guy in 2nd place has its own biplane). Since Surigon was homeless at the time, he sleep in the airport (How annoying!). The next day Surigon buy to much fuel and a world map for traveling to the East.
A few days later, Surigon finds a town, a town in riots, because the animals of the zoo escaped. He goes to the zoo to talk with its owner. The owner gets scared when he see Surigon, because its an alien; from many years, humans are enemies of an alien species called the "Alien-Aliens" (Appearance: Steriotypical aliens); The owner obviously thinked that Surigon was a kind of pet of the AA, but Surigon explained he has no relation with those creatures. The owner said to Surigon to help retrieve the animals back to the zoo and save the city. Surigon's fathers give to him for defense a pair of Antimatter powered gloves, to give powerfull punchs. With that Surigon silenced most of the animals, withouth killing them, and send them back to the zoo. The most impactant battle was the one with the gorila, when Surigon seen a primitive version of his species, he got shocked. However Surigon thinks that humans are something rare, they seem to not envolved at the most smart point of the brain, however they even have very good tech too.
With all the animals in the zoo, the town is saved, and Surigon left it and goes to the forest.
A few days in the forest, Surigon is finded by a guy with a car near the road, he takes him to Paris, his home.
The guy taked Surigon as pet, Surigon didn't liked that as he is to advanced to be called "pet". When they reach Paris, Surigon get surprised when he see the buildings, whose foundations is on the ground instead on trees like in Daif. When he reached guy's home, Surigon escaped on the night. Surigon seen the Eifel tower, he finds it interesting, is big, old, attracts to much people, and looks to diferent to any other building. As fuzzles climb to much trees, Surigon wanted to climb the tower. That caused a big mess with the public when they seen an alien creature in the top of the tower, a few helicopters tried to down Surigon from here. The same guy appeared again, and climbed the tower and said to Surigon:
Guy: Suri, my pet, please go down.
Surigon: I'm not your pet! >:(
This conversation distracted Surigon and someone shoted a tranquilizer dart.
Surigon awakes in the house of that guy and escapes again.
He went to the West of the city to the airport, but he doesn't have money, later Surigon finds a hope. There is a biplane racing with models of XX centaury (WTF!, Said Surigon). The price is a rebuilded biplane and some money. When Surigon won that race, the guy at 2nd place wanted a rematch for the next day (happens that the guy in 2nd place has its own biplane). Since Surigon was homeless at the time, he sleep in the airport (How annoying!). The next day Surigon buy to much fuel and a world map for traveling to the East.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.
What was the guy's name?
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.
Nice! 
There are a few spelling mistakes though...
There are a few spelling mistakes though...
Balance is imperative; without it, total collapse and destruction is imminent.
Re: Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.
Nah, but it's readable 
though if he's planning to publish it somewhere he should try to fix them.
though if he's planning to publish it somewhere he should try to fix them.
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Re: Chaos and Cosmos 1: The beginning.
When Surigon started to fly. The biplane guy come and shout "The rematch!", and started chasing him. Surigon wanted to escape from him because its nothing important, but Surigon crashed...
...on a cloud!
The biplane guy also crashed, he didn't understod what happened, and he was corrupted by Chaos. The Chaos was to one that transformed the clouds in platforms, it activated the power of the "STRATOS BALL", a sky-blue colored ball that controls wind, air, clouds and sounds, Chaos summon lots of wind elemental soldiers and gived the STRATOS BALL to the biplane guy, corrupted by Chaos.
Surigon had to defeat him to continue. It was a hard battle since he need to see where he step, because he can fall, and the wind soldiers, that actually don't make to much damage, push Surigon away trying to make him fall. Surigon defeated those minions, however, he needs to defeat the corrupted Biplane guy. He face him, and with one punch he defeated him, it was just a simple human, with none combat skill. Surigon taked again the biplane and continued flying to the East chasing Chaos.
After some days, the Biplane fuel is empty. Surigon down to India to recharge it, as well as doing some repairs. He look at the place, and he didn't find any clue of Chaos here. Surigon went to a temple of some old guru, the guru said to him that only the Chaos self can destroy himself, as the cycle ends incomplete and all get unbalanced, the Chaos always finds its own doom.
Surigon just understand that he need to do some "fire vs fire", but there is more of what the guru said, when a form of Chaos appears in the Universe, its own unbalanceness ends destroying it, beacause it destroy the cycles of Nature.
When the biplane is ready, Surigon go to Japan in order to screach for Chaos. Surigon down in some mountains, he finds a great cliff with traps on it, when he climbed it he finded an arena, Surigon ring some bell, and an elevator comes from the center of the arena, with a sumo on it:
Sumo: Who wants to challange the "great master sumo"!.
The sumo saw Surigon, he find him a worthy adversary. Surigon accepted the challenge. Alike the biplane guy, this human is harder to fight, as he is heavy as has some combat skills. After 6 attaempts of the sumo for smashing Surigon, he gives to him a punch on his head (his weakness) and the sumo falls, after wining the challange, the sumo gives to surigon some sumo skills.
Surigon go to Tokio, where the sky looks creepy, but why, Surigon while exploring the city finds the root of the problem, and hologram machine is showing a "glitch", and it covered all the sky. The japaneses tryied to fix it, but the failed. Surigon gives punch to the hologram machine, and the ID 0 changes to ID 1, it seems ID 0 was empty, and that caused it to glitch, people of Japan made an animation of Surigon punching the machine as reward. Surigon keeps exploring Tokio, he finds interesting the city itself, full with lights and stuff, he buy some sunglasses. Surigon find the tower of Tokio, it reminds him to much the Eifel tower. As no Chaos has been found, Surigon outside the city and enters some ninja town, the people of here heared about the sumo and the glitch thingy, and the send surigon to the great ninja master. The master wanted to met Surigon and challange him. For Surigon, the ninja master was more agile and faster than other humans he met, making a more challangening battle. Surigon wons again, and learned ninja skills. Surigon is now ready to go more to the East. He takes his biplane and goes to Hawaii. Surigon down in a volcanic area, where he find Chaos with 2 balls, a red and orange ones. The red one is the "PYRO BALL", capable of control fire and hot. The orange one is the "IGNIS BALL", capable of control lava, magma and acids. He use both to make fire and lava minions, as well to make this place a pure hot mess. Chaos also make a lava/fire monster called "Pyrignis". Surigon finds himself and lot of trouble, but with his new skills he defeat every minion. Pyrignis was a great challange, he is capable to make all the island explode, Surigon almost died in lava, but this Fuzzle a great thirst of revenge, none cannot stop him, he is to lucky in some cases, as he can defeat that kind of enemies, he has antimatter gloves as well. When Surigon defeats Pyrignis, the people of Hawaii maked a party for Surigon, all seems happy now, but this is just the starting. Surigon still moves to the East on his biplane, and the next step is...
...America!
...on a cloud!
The biplane guy also crashed, he didn't understod what happened, and he was corrupted by Chaos. The Chaos was to one that transformed the clouds in platforms, it activated the power of the "STRATOS BALL", a sky-blue colored ball that controls wind, air, clouds and sounds, Chaos summon lots of wind elemental soldiers and gived the STRATOS BALL to the biplane guy, corrupted by Chaos.
Surigon had to defeat him to continue. It was a hard battle since he need to see where he step, because he can fall, and the wind soldiers, that actually don't make to much damage, push Surigon away trying to make him fall. Surigon defeated those minions, however, he needs to defeat the corrupted Biplane guy. He face him, and with one punch he defeated him, it was just a simple human, with none combat skill. Surigon taked again the biplane and continued flying to the East chasing Chaos.
After some days, the Biplane fuel is empty. Surigon down to India to recharge it, as well as doing some repairs. He look at the place, and he didn't find any clue of Chaos here. Surigon went to a temple of some old guru, the guru said to him that only the Chaos self can destroy himself, as the cycle ends incomplete and all get unbalanced, the Chaos always finds its own doom.
Surigon just understand that he need to do some "fire vs fire", but there is more of what the guru said, when a form of Chaos appears in the Universe, its own unbalanceness ends destroying it, beacause it destroy the cycles of Nature.
When the biplane is ready, Surigon go to Japan in order to screach for Chaos. Surigon down in some mountains, he finds a great cliff with traps on it, when he climbed it he finded an arena, Surigon ring some bell, and an elevator comes from the center of the arena, with a sumo on it:
Sumo: Who wants to challange the "great master sumo"!.
The sumo saw Surigon, he find him a worthy adversary. Surigon accepted the challenge. Alike the biplane guy, this human is harder to fight, as he is heavy as has some combat skills. After 6 attaempts of the sumo for smashing Surigon, he gives to him a punch on his head (his weakness) and the sumo falls, after wining the challange, the sumo gives to surigon some sumo skills.
Surigon go to Tokio, where the sky looks creepy, but why, Surigon while exploring the city finds the root of the problem, and hologram machine is showing a "glitch", and it covered all the sky. The japaneses tryied to fix it, but the failed. Surigon gives punch to the hologram machine, and the ID 0 changes to ID 1, it seems ID 0 was empty, and that caused it to glitch, people of Japan made an animation of Surigon punching the machine as reward. Surigon keeps exploring Tokio, he finds interesting the city itself, full with lights and stuff, he buy some sunglasses. Surigon find the tower of Tokio, it reminds him to much the Eifel tower. As no Chaos has been found, Surigon outside the city and enters some ninja town, the people of here heared about the sumo and the glitch thingy, and the send surigon to the great ninja master. The master wanted to met Surigon and challange him. For Surigon, the ninja master was more agile and faster than other humans he met, making a more challangening battle. Surigon wons again, and learned ninja skills. Surigon is now ready to go more to the East. He takes his biplane and goes to Hawaii. Surigon down in a volcanic area, where he find Chaos with 2 balls, a red and orange ones. The red one is the "PYRO BALL", capable of control fire and hot. The orange one is the "IGNIS BALL", capable of control lava, magma and acids. He use both to make fire and lava minions, as well to make this place a pure hot mess. Chaos also make a lava/fire monster called "Pyrignis". Surigon finds himself and lot of trouble, but with his new skills he defeat every minion. Pyrignis was a great challange, he is capable to make all the island explode, Surigon almost died in lava, but this Fuzzle a great thirst of revenge, none cannot stop him, he is to lucky in some cases, as he can defeat that kind of enemies, he has antimatter gloves as well. When Surigon defeats Pyrignis, the people of Hawaii maked a party for Surigon, all seems happy now, but this is just the starting. Surigon still moves to the East on his biplane, and the next step is...
...America!
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