Possible crossover fanfiction/comic?

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I like it so far :) will you try the comic format too?
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Thank you. If I figure out how to do it, yes.
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Do you have any ideas on how I can improve it so far?
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Hmm, not really. I'd like it more if the stories were a bit longer, but that's more of a personal preference.
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Well, the stories so far are just previews. Not the entire thing.
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What part of Submachines 1 through 10 should I make a preview of next?
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Hmm, I'd like to see something from the beginning, at Sub1 (or Sub0), if it's not very spoilery.
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Sorry. but that's not something I figured out yet. I also haven't figured out how the end will be like. I will say, though, that I have BIG plans for the secrets from Subs 2, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9, and 10, but I can't tell you anything else about it, though, because I don't want to give out too many spoilers. Any other parts you want a preview of?
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I've decided most of the order of the story. The order will be: Sub 1, a tiny bit of Sub 2, Sub 0, the rest of Sub 2, Sub 3, part of Sub 4, Sub 32, the rest of Sub 4, a tiny bit of Sub 5, Sub Universe, the rest of Sub 5, Sub 6, Sub 7, Sub 8, Sub 9, Sub FLF, then Sub 10. It might change, but this is the current Plan.
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Preview #5. Current Area: Sub 3 Loop, first part (The part with all the notes in the HD version). Also, I have a headcanon that the "cycles" of the loop are points in the loop where the compass coordinates max out, reversing the value of either the x or y coordinates.

King Dedede was getting worried. The rooms weren't ending, and they all looked the same. He decided to keep heading right. It has to end sometime, right? Maybe he should have taken the device in the room with the machine. He told Bandanna Dee, Kirby, and Meta Knight to wait while he sees how far these rooms go. He's walked past at least 50 rooms, but probably many, many, many more, and was getting exhausted.
He saw some color. Is that the exit? He ran as fast as possible to the color. When he got close enough, he just stared.
It was Kirby, Bandanna Dee, and Meta Knight, still waiting. The rooms looped back around.
King Dedede screamed, "THEY NEVER END!"
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