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Okay, so recently, many of my old works that were lost in my mother old PC Desktop that got destroyed I recently got back. So, instead of clogging up some other page, I'll post them here.
You can post a reply and all, but I ask that you wait until you see:

DONE!

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Noice :D cannot wait to see!


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Okay, so I had this Mythology Class back in High School, and I was assigned to a group to where we would write out a play which would depict a modern adaptation to an old Greek Mythology. Each person in my group wrote one act each. And I type them all together into a script we could Read off of.

The adaption was from "Jason and Golden Fleece" to:

Quest for the Shiny Kicks

Act 1

We see a suburban house. Outside the front door a teenage girl walks to the front door. She finds one of her shiny high heels. As soon as she sees it she gets red with anger. She opens the front door hard, and then she slams it shut. We find her in the main hall. She walks to her left into the living room. She finds her younger brother playing on his laptop a computer game called THE KINGDOM.

LIZ: yelling at Jason: You broke my new shoes! How dare you destroy my new shiny kicks?

JASON: mockingly: Well why in the world would you leave them in front of the door for someone to step on?

LIZ: I don’t know all I know your buying me a new pair of shiny kicks.

JASON: With what money?

LIZ: I don’t know you better cough some money up.Until I get a new pair of shoes I’m taking your video game.

JASON: You can’t do that.

LIZ: Yes I can watch me.

Liz grabs the flash drive from Jason’s laptop. The screen goes blank

JASON: I was almost at the level of getting my Kingdom back.

LIZ: Oh well, I will tell you where you can buy me a new pair, at the mall.
Their exclusive right now and everyone is trying to buy them so you better go now so you can get there before their all sold out.

JASON: Ok, then I’ll get the video game?

LIZ: When I get my shiny kicks, I can’t walk around with one shoe.

JASON: Oh okay.

As he walks to his car he gives his sister the tongue. She sticks her back at Jason. He picks up his cell phone and calls his friends Hercules, Orpheus, Caster, Pollux, Peieus, and Hiylas

End of act one.


Act 2 The Detour

We see a boy on his cell phone calling his friends for help to get his sister some new shiny kicks.
JASON: Hey guy I need you help to go to the mall and get a new pair of shiny kicks,

H+H: Uh...no thanks that’s sooo girly for a guy.

OPHEUS: YUP.

CASTOR: Same here.

POLLUX: Sure true.

PEIEUS: Boy howdy.

JASON: Come on guys I was just about to finish my game, The Kingdom when my bratty sister took it because she things I brook her shiny kicks. Now she wont give it back with out a new pair.

HERCULES: She has the kingdom!? Oh that changes everything. Right guy?

OPHEUS: That’s true.

CASTOR: I’ll go.

POLLUX: Wait for me.

PEIES: I’m coming

HIYLAS: wait let me get the agos.

JASON: thanks guys I knew I could count on you.

Jason hangs up his cell phone, as soon as he puts it in his pants pocket the Agos comes up the street and stops right in front of Jason.

JASON: wow! That was fast.

HERCULES: we do it for the kingdom.

Jason gets into the car. TheAargos drives away to the mall. They soon come up to a detour.

JASON: What going on?

HERCULES: I have no idea.

HYLAS: This sucks.

JASON: Tell me about it. Now we will never get to the mall.

WORKER: Hey. You guys are gonna have to go this way.

JASON: What happen?

WORKER: Some ox’s from the farm over the hill escaped and cause a car accident.

JASON: Wow. Okay thanks.

HECULES: What’s that?! Whoa! Look out for that ox!

JASON: Ahh! Were gonna die!

As they were driving one of the ox’s ran out in front of the Argos, it cause them to run into a ditch.

JASON: Well this sucks. How are we supposed to get to the mall. Now we are stuck in a ditch.

HYLAS: Hey what’s that?

JASON: It’s a tow truck.

HERCULES: Hmm… reading: Maden’s Towing Service. Cool.

Jason walks to the owner.

JASON: Sir will you give us a ride to the mall.

TOW TRUCK DRIVER: Sure a thing. Hop-a-in.

JASON, HERCULES, and HYLAS: Thanks.

JASON: The rest of you stay with the Argos

END OF ACT TWO.

ACT 3.

The tow truck diver is giving Jason, Hercules and Hylas a ride to the mall. The tow trucks stops right a the front entrance.

JASON: Thanks for the ride.

TOW TRUCK DRIVER: Sure a thing. Anything for the king-a-dom.

The tow truck diver drives away.

JASON: Well were almost there.

HERCULES: yeah. But we are about to do something no boy has ever done before. We are going shoe shopping.

HYLAS: Hey how hard can it be?

They walk through the front door. When they enter it seems quite.

HYLAS: See what did I tell you.

Then the clock struck five. Then people are running into the mall from every seen and not seen entrance.

HYLAS: I have been wrong before.

JASON: Come on guys. Remember what we are here for. The kingdom!

HERCULES: Yeah for the kingdom!

HYLAS: The kingdom!

JASON: All right lets do this!

They run into the crowd. As soon as they step in they are lost.

JASON: Were lost.

HERCULES. Sure true.

HYLAS: Hate to say it.

The guys keep walking thought the crowd as if it was a strong wind pushing us back. As they keep going they are walking slower and slower.

HERCULES: Guys I need a drink if we are to continue.

JASON: Same here.

HYLAS: Me too.

They struggle to walk though the crowd to he nearest fast-food restaurant. As soon as they enter they had got out of the wave of people as if they had a huge weight lifted from their backs.

HERCULES: Lets wait this out.

JASON: How long will that be?

HYLAS: While looking at his watch: one hour.

HERCULES: Well… let’s make our self comfortable.

They all order a bottle of water. Then they find a seat that was in the middle of the room. They place was almost empty.

HYLAS: I gust no one is that interested in food right now.

HERCULES: Hey look over there.

He points to a hot girl breaking up with her boyfriend.

GIRL: I hate you. Don’t you get it? I ever love you now go away.

The man that the girl was talking to walks away slouching. Like he has a brown heart.

HERCULES: I call dibs on her.

HYLAS: No. I saw her first!

JASON: Comes one guy we have a plan we need to stick to. Remember. The kingdom!

Hercules and Hylas is to busy arguing over the girl.

HERCULES: She mine!

HYLAS: No! She mine!

As they fight the girl starts to walk out back into the hallway.

HERCULES: Hey! There she goes!

HYLAS: I said she was mine!

As soon as the hot girl steps out into the crowed hallway Hercules and Hylas run after her.

JASON: No! Don’t go out there! You'll will never make it!

Hercules and Hylas are running neck and neck toward the hot girl. They are to busy brawling over her to her Jason. They run into the crowed.

JASON: No stop!

He tries to grab one of them. But he is too late they are gone. Jason had no chose but to wait. After tens minute the huge crowed is gone. He runs all over the hallway of the mall trying to find them. After he ran out of the makeup department thinking that they follow the hot girl in there. Then in the sunlight he sees a watch on the ground. Its glass was shatter. The last time it showed was a minute after Hercules and Hylas ran out after the girls. As Jason sees this he falls down on his knees in front of the watch.

JASON: no. No. No. No, no, no, no, nooooooooo! I will avenge you my brothers!!!!!

End of act 3

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Act 4

After Jason goes thought many horrors he finally arrives at the mall. He walks to the nearest workers

JASON: Where are you shoe department?

WORKER: UMM…go up one floor and to the right is the shoe department.

JASON: Thanks.

Jason runs for the nearest escalator. Then he rides it up to the second floor.
When he gets there he is only to find that they are sold out. Then he runs for the escalator. But he accidentally ran for the up escalator. Then realizing his mistake he run down the down escalator. He fined the same worker.

JASON: The kicks are all sold out.

WORKER: Ohh… I just sold the last pair.

JASON: Whom did you sell it to?

WORKER: A group of people that call themselves the Harpes.

JASON: Which way did they go?

WORKER: pointing that way.

JASON: Thanks.

WORKER: shouting: Wait I have to warn you. They smell really bad!

Jason didn’t hear him.

END OF ACT 4

ACT 5

Jason is running towards a group of people that call themselves the Harpes. He sees them with the shoe box that have the shiny kicks. He runs after them. He follows them into a dark alley. But they are gone. The alley ends into a dead end. But then he finds a cardboard box that had a secret entrance into the Harpes hide out. He pushes it aside. He craws his way in. he found himself inside of a big abandon shoe factory. In the distance he sees the Harpes. Quick thinking he hides behind a pile of old shoebox. The tallest member of the group gives the box to their leader. When they do they all bow down to him like he is a god. Jason trying to see the dark figure leans in a little forward. By doing so he knocks over the pile of shoes boxes. The leader and the Harpes see him

LEADER: Get him!

Jason running towards the exit gets cut off.


JASON: stuttering: Hey… is this the place to get… new shiny kicks.

The Harpes are about to attack Jason gets ready to fight. But is knockout by their terrible smell.

JASON: as he falls down: You’re the man with the terrible smell.

Jason wakes up to see the Harpeys surround him. He is about to attack them. But from the dark throne

LEADER: Stop! They will not attack you. No one has found our secret hideout before. But for those who do have to fight me.

JASON: Who are you?

The leader of the Harpeys steps out of the darkness. It is a retired boxer. He has tattoos of a dragon on his forehead.

JASON: The dragon? Your support to be dead you die in a car accident.

THE DRAGON: Yes. But I fake my death. You see, I wanted to leave the old life so I used my stunt double instead of me.

JASON: All right lets fight.

THE DRAGON: Really? All right this should be fun.

Jason and the dragon start to walk around in a circle just inside of the ring of Harpeys. Each is getting ready to fight each other. Then they both start to run into each other screaming. Then at the last second Jason pulls out a knife and stabs the dragon. He falls down dead. The harped gasp.

JASON: yeah! Who’s the man! Huh? Who’s the man!

Jason walks over to the shiny kicks. As he does the harpies back off.
One of them speaks up.


ONE OF THE HARPEIS: You are now our leader.

JASON as he walks to the kicks: No I’m not I just want the kicks

Jason takes the box and walks to the exit. Before he opens the door

JASON: But I will give you all one command. OK?

The Harpies nod.

JASON : I want you all to get a job and take a bath, because you all smell like crap.

Jason opens the door.

End of act 5

Act 6

Jason walks out of the Harpes hideout and back into the alley. Then as he walks towards the street he hears the Argos.

OPEHUS: There you are. Did yo get the kicks?

JASON: Yes I did. Lets go home.

Jason gets into the car. The Argos drive towards home. Then the next scene he is drop off at his home. Jason gets out of the car.

JASON: thanks guy you all really help.

CASTOR: of course we are happy to help. Besides we do anything for the kingdom.

The Argos drives away. Then Jason walks to his house. Then he open the door. He find his sister in the living room.

JASON: sis I found your kicks.

LIZ as she gets up: You found the kicks?

JASON: Yes. You have no idea how I had to get these.

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DONE!

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LOL this is funny

"The Shiny Kicks" that was hilarious

and then they're all just strolling through the dept store fighting over girls and such :D


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DONE!
For Now.

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28 Apr 2015 14:12
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Nothing?
Okay, here the full magazine.

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DONE!

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WOW, thats pretty "god" stuff there! :D

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